Analysis of three essays

I chose to read b, c, and g. B and c offered simple ideas, but never really jumped into a specific topic, rather stayed general. G on the other hand offered a complex, yet understandable thesis, and wrote it very well. There was no chopiness in the sentences, and the overall organization of the paper is excellent. It followed the opening paragraph beautifully. Overall, this essay just offered a stronger thesis and laid it on the paper much more affectively than the other two.