What I learned from my essay

In my essay, I presented the argument that the first impressions of P&P were crucial as they were used to define the character of a person, whether accurately or inaccurately. One major flaw I made was not clearly stating it in the thesis. I stated it similarly there, but really did well in the conclusion. I also made some minor mistakes in grammar throughout the essay. Overall, I was pleased in my ability to stay on track for the most part and look forward to writing even better essays as the year goes on.